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The Echo Hunter's | Supernatural Hunters | Businesses App
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2 days ago

​​IGN: Stiles S. Kahele

 

Preferred Name: Stiles

 

Discord: stiles_121

 

Age (optional):

 

OOC:

 

Why do you want a business on Echoes: 1984?: Echoes is a place of mystery and monsters, upon joining the server I found out that there was a supernatural element to it, with ghosts around and by chance the ghostbusters theme song popped onto my spotify when I was told this so I jokingly said it to some friends I had made and I became reality. 


Business Discord: https://discord.gg/samKfspj 


What will your business sell and/or do?

My intent of the group was to hunt ghosts and other supernatural creatures sort of like a between of phasmophobia, ghostbusters, and the hunters in supernatural

Provide the lore of your character, and how they came to open a business. Please attempt to limit yourself to more-or-less 1,500 words (maximum 2,500):

I ran through the woods stumbling and tripping over things, my leg bleeding dripping onto the floor beneath me, branches hitting me in the face, and bushes tearing up my arms. I dove behind a large tree and put my hand over my mouth to dull my deep and loud breaths. Then I heard the twigs sound of twigs snapping and crumbling under their weight, the deep almost hush panting, I looked around me hoping for an escape I looked down, and there was something that was holstered to my side that nearly looked like a sword that was a little bit bigger than the length of my elbow to my fingertips, I didn't have time to looked at the blade because there was a crunch and from a distance, I heard a squeal, I unholster the blade and held it in my hand, awkwardly not knowing the proper way to use it. I waited and the sound of the thing dissipated away from me, I stood up and looked around, trees everywhere my eyes still having trouble adjusting to the darkness, but from what I could see there was nothing. I breathed, finally pushing my brown hair out of my face. I tried to remember what I was doing in this forest but the more I thought the more I questioned myself. I couldn't remember why I was here or even how I got here or what I was before I woke up in the forest. Before I could think of anything else I heard the footsteps and they were coming in fast, so I started to run as hard as I could. Still, something grabbed my leg baring its jaws into my leg bringing me to the ground, and started to drag me, I turned around and jabbed the sword into the darkness and it shrieked stamped, and fell to the ground, because of the blood loss and broken bones I lost consciousness. When I woke up I looked down, my shirt and pants were stained with blood and torn up, and one of my shoes was missing. The only thing that was still intact was a strange red hat I had on. I looked to my side and fear crept up my back, I sat up and scooted back. On the ground lay a creature not human, more like a skeleton with fur on some parts of its body if it could even call it that, it was tall, its arms looked like they could grab someone 7 feet away and the claws could tear apart the strongest man alive, it had a head that looked like a deer skull covered in blood its eyes still wide open staring blankly, In its chest was the blade that I had stabbed into the darkness. I got up limping toward the beast slowly making sure if it were to get back up again I would have time to run, I got close enough to pull the sword out of its chest and I kneeled and put my hand on its face closing its eyes,  “I'm sorry” I whispered I got up and started walking. I walked for miles until I got to a road and collapsed. The last thing I heard was a car engine and the squeaking of brakes. There were footsteps and a scream “RIKO GET OUT HERE” and the world went black.
When I woke up I was in the hospital, I sat up and looked around and outside the door were cops, in my confusion of what was happening two people walked into the room. I looked over to them, they wore matching hoodies, one of them was short, her face looking worried and for some reason she was holding a teddy bear and the guy next to her was around my height and for some reason had a eyepatch on before i could ask them, the guy started to bombard me with question “why were you in the forest”  “who are you” “where did you get that knife” “where you with anyone” “do you know anything about the body” I stood there with my mouth open but not knowing what to say, the girl saw he was overwhelming me so she tried to cover his mouth with her hand but ended up slapping him in the throat “OWWW” he said “sorry, I was trying to cover your mouth, point is stop asking him questions your overwhelming him” he looked at me then her and back and sat down in a chair that was next to my bed folding his arms “hello” said the girl “my name is Dianna and my friend there” she pointed at the guy that was just yelling at me “is Riko, were not trying to hurt you or anything were just trying to figure out whats going on” she took a breath for a sec and asked “if I may ask what is your name” I looked down and thought trying to remember my name but I just looked up at her and shook my head not wanting to talk “ok well umm, can you tell us what you remeber” I thought back “I woke up in a forest and something chased me” “and you killed it” she pulled out the knife “with this, do you know were you got it?” I shook my head “it was just sheathed on my side when I woke up”  “ ok well…” she was she was cut of by the doctor walking in the room. “Im sorry but visiting time is over for Mr. Doe you need to leave” he said motioning at the exit Riko left but Dianna walked over to the bed and handed me the teddy bear “his names fred and i thought you would want him” she turned around but turned back around, and handed me a card, “we know what you did, well i mean what you killed its are job to hunt things like that. You have promise so when you get out give me a call k?” I just nodded, she smiled and walked out of the room and the doctors performed his tests, they released me two weeks later and the first thing I did was go to a payphone, I dial the number on the card two rings and someone picked up “hello?” asked the voice “Dianna?” I asked, I heard a chuckle signifying it was her “if I help you guys do you think i can figure out who I am?” I said with hope “we will never know unless we try” I paused thought “ok.” I took a breath “i'm in”.

 What would you do if someone came into your place of business and began to cause trouble OOC?

 I would ask them to leave respectfully, not scream cuss or anything like that and I would instruct my employees to do the same. If they do not leave the premises of their business after being asked to respectfully leave multiple times, I would message the mods or admins and report them. And after that wait and try to continue RP with other players, because at that point its out of my hands and i've done all i could

What would you do if someone came into your place of business and began to cause trouble IC?

 Personally, my Character is calm and collected, usually doing their best not to be angry so this is not pertaining to the rest of the team. I would ask them to leave respectfully if they did not have anything that pertains to our business to report or were interrupting another customer, if after a while of asking them to leave for a while and they still refuse I would tell them that I was calling the police on them saying that he was refusing to leave the premises because the business would technically be private property and if they do not leave when asked it would be against the law. If they still have not left I would call the police and wait for them to come to take the person out of the building.

How would your business greet and provide service to customers (e.g. “Hello! What will you be getting today? *The man began to click into the register, getting ready to serve the customer.*)? 

“Who are you going to call? (Not them—call us!) Welcome to the Echo Hunters, where Supernatural is our specialty and no specter is safe! Whether you’re experiencing bumps in the night, pine-chilling whispers, a full-blown poltergeist causing chaos, or a Vampire in the sun we have the tools, talent, and tenacity to banish the bizarre. we’re here to tackle the unknown head-on!  How can we assist you?” Says Marcus clicking at his computer and looking over seeing a tiny man in front of him “Hello” said the small man “I'm here to inquire about your services” “Ummmm” said Marcus moving around a little in discomfort, He reached down and pushed the intercom on the desk “guys?” he said “can you come down here you're going to want to see this” the team walked down and their jaw dropped. I pushed through the others, ‘ok it's an elf’ I thought ‘just a normal tuesday’ I knelt on one knee to look him in the eye, “what do you need are services for sir?” “Fairies” he said, “what do they have santa’s toys” whispered Zack, i looked over and dianna slapped him in the head. I looked back to the tiny man “what is your problem with the Fairies?” “there taking children at night” “ok are services are yours but we require half payment before and the other half of the payment after” “whatever you need is yours just save them” ok pointed at Kameron, Tray, and Adeline “yall are coming with me” “what no fair” said Zack and Barrin in unison “sorry guys i need you to stay here and ummmm.” I looked over to Riko and Dianna “we need you here to help with laundry” said Riko “but that's the reason we highered Marcus” they complained “to bad, go do laundry” Riko said pointing at the door next to him “fine” they said Zack and Barrin walked into the laundry room. I turned toward the elf and asked “where to” he motioned his hand and we followed he led us for a while and we ended up next to a forest “there in there, but I can't go in its against the law of elfish” “that's ok we can handle it from here you just go back and pay the half tell us how we can contact you after the jobs done.” and with that the little man ran surprisingly fast off. “Do you feel anything Adeline?” I asked looking at her not realizing she was on the her knees crying “TRAY” I yelled out of fear “GET ADELINE” we ran over to her “so much sadness and pain” she said, i looked at Tray she can't stay here i need you to take her back to Business me and Kam will be fine” Tray nodded picking up Adeline and carrying her back to the Business “ok Kam it's just you and me you ready man?” he smiled and nodded “ya, we got this” and with that we walked into the forest . We took out compact crossbows and loaded silver arrow heads, we walked through the forest and I took the chance to quiz Kam “ok quiz time, question one how do fairies get to the mortal world?” “a spell or portal but in this case it has to be a spell because if it was a portal half the town would have been gone by now.” “ok good job so if we can find whos doing the incantation we can send the fairies back” he grabbed my shoulder and pulled me back pointing at something with his other hand “look” and so I did, there was  a shack and in front of it was leprechauns, but those were the only defense so we took aim and shot turning them into dust on the spot no sound. We crept to the house and opened the door and looked in the fairies must have forgotten to turn there cloaking on because they were in plain view we carefully went through the crowd doing are best to not step on a fairy, we made it to a room that sound was coming out of, so we opened the door, inside the room there was a man in a chair reading from a book, he looked up and tilted his head at me “Mark? Did they bring you home?” he asked, I walked over but he held up his cane “Stay away your not Mark wheres Mark they promised him” he started to scream “MARK” we heard a russell in the other room and and little voices. Kam instantly closed the door and locked it holding it shut. The old man kept yelling “Mark,” then a hand appeared on his shoulder pulling on him and a man walked from behind him, he wore a nice suit and his hair was combed back nicely. He put on a Tweed cap and spilled, then he grabbed a knife and stabbed the old man. She took his hat off and soaked it in the blood. ‘Dammit it's a redcap’ I looked over to kam scared but trying his hardest to put on a brave face. The Redcap put on his hat, surprisingly the blood dispersed from the hat. He looked at us bearing his knife, smiling, “hello” he said to us “it looks like you're in my home and I must do what I can to protect my home shouldn't I?” I looked around and saw it a box of salt but I waited needed to get this guy to tell me were there weakness was “fine you caught us” I said, Kam looked at me like i was crazy but I gave him a reassuring look, I looked at the redcap was surprised for a sec we didn't fight but then went back to his victorious smile, I stepped back toward the table and leaned on it “well if your going to kill us at least answer a question for us” the redcap thought for a sec and nodded “how did you get here?” i asked, the redcap laughed “ that stupid old man opened up a portal, and let us out thinking we could bring back his dead boy and of course I lied to him and now that i've answered your question im going to kill you both” he raised the knife in the air about to bring it onto me when there was a yell “stop” Cam said “I get a question too don't I?” The redcap froze thinking and then backed off “fine one only think wisely” Kam thought and then said "why did an army not come out why did so few of you come out?” “The portal was too small.” he pointed at the book, ‘of course’ I thought the redcap continued “It took too much power to get here that's the reason they sent the strongest” he said flexing “well now that's done it's time to die” before he got the knife into the air I grabbed the salt and poured it on the ground, The redcap looked at me with anger and I smiled at him “not even the strongest Fairy can reset counting the gains you and me both know this” he angrily started to pick up the salt grain by grain trying to rush to kill us but he was to slow, “Kam knife” I said Kam threw me a knife and I grabbed the book and stabbed it there was a horrible scream and the redcap turned into dust, I pulled my knife out of the book and shoved both in a bag, and we walked out, I fist bumped Kam “good catch with the question” and we walked back to the Business. When we walked in everyone was in the front waiting. “It's done, give this to the elf as proof and have him transfer the money or however he pays us” I handed them the book, then I said “who's hungry, I’m feeling cheeseburgers”.



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